Brothers In Arms

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frère dans ta chaise c'est moi qui t'embrasse When I die I wont say goodbye If you die I shall cry Shall we both die? Who then opens the sky? Flowers will bloom though Père Lachaise knows why When death dances We all shall cry I lay my head down so to sleep In vats of wine dreams ferment to keep Souls be damned Love made us weep I will be there With you and the roses

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Viv Wigley

Date: 4/11/2018 1:32:00 AM

Excellent, Arthur, moving. Regards, Viv

Eve Roper

Date: 4/9/2018 10:45:00 AM

Excellent, Arthur, your verses have been a pleasure to read this morning .. Hugs Eve ~`* frère dans ta chaise c'est moi qui t'embrasse... don't know what it means , but OK!

Darren White
Date: 4/9/2018 3:00:00 PM

Eve, it means: brother in your chair, I hug you :)

Darren White

Date: 4/8/2018 12:41:00 PM

je t'embrasse aussi :)

Tim Smith

Date: 4/8/2018 9:42:00 AM

And your love will be reunited

Akkina Downing

Date: 4/8/2018 8:24:00 AM

As always beautiful write. And a lovely song along with the photo... Hugs :)

Paul Callus

Date: 4/8/2018 7:05:00 AM

I have a feeling this song has been inspired by Darren....a brother in a (wheel)chair. Lovely and touching, Arthur. The accompanying song is fitting; once again Père Lachaise cemetery serves a purpose. Regards // paul

Jan Allison

Date: 4/8/2018 5:19:00 AM

such melancholy lines Arthur and I love pic and the track you chose to go with the poem. Only saying to hubby yesterday how i regret not seeing Dire Straits when I lived in the UK - awesome group.:-) hugs jan xx