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my thoughts after seeing a mother holding her child feeling her pain and suffering as she roared crying with her little sons blood on her hands after planes bombing she was roaring to god in the highest temple of love all this war and killing is sick genocide and money hungry nations are behind it for the oil plain theft 

A world changes course expelling the good grim reaper twisted joke entering this forbidden zone called democracy Careless acts of violence black and white mothers burying their children so much tears soak the very grounds salt of this earth where moral order breaks down in societies failure A bad replacement shapeshifting demons rule Where no longer they care about peoples suffering removing God's teachings from schools so our forefathers died in vain blood of our ancestors Taking away human rights amnesty international laugh a minute lawless democracies without proper vision killing without just cause tyrants bragging ill will Without facing the justice of all lands Murder is murder so says the judge above all stealing is robbing without deeds aquired laid down by the Lord on stone himself We all know its the devil's playground now Darkness of your souls reek with many lies told When fancy coated words fall out vomit from the mouths who ware suits As that is a trademark of the biggest robbers there is Stealing even by stealth or forced to ground poisionous morals killing the seed of truth sewn from the garden of lust dark or light Open your eyes blind beggars of hell disfunctional greedy merchants and war criminals alike you all sign a pact together like wolves we see the suffering and torment of your weapons tipped with poison blaming everyone but yourselves Creating hate through your neverending violence amongst the innocent victims raped of everything God be merciful unto your rotten souls Damning the victims with your pride filled agendas we all become victims if we sit without a voice listen pride Peace is the way forward that looks above and beyond stand down dark spirits your lust knows no bounds drunken with greed Light of our saviour will come one day supreme commander I will kneel to the creator When this earth goes into darkness again we need to pray for salvation no longer do we walk but stumble in the pathway of his loving ways Rock of faith we stand strong for our childrens sake to give them a future generation Mercy shake hands make Eden beautiful again The signs are coming to pass to celebrate the happiness and joy Heaven above the angels will sing

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 8/25/2016 10:44:00 PM
Hi Liam!:))Wow!This is a very powerful, outstanding poem you've written here my dearest friend Liam.All so beautifully penned with truth n' caring.Yes,very sadly the world we live in these days is completely in chaos, Liam.All the very sad, terrible events, injustices everywhere, make my heart n' soul very sad everyday.Prayers are very powerful, we need pray more for all Liam.Another very beautiful sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.Excellent piece!Awesome!A true glowing gem!Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7+++ ++!A Fav!I wish you n' your very dear family all the best always.To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything.Please keep positive n' very strong.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers,Liam.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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