Kim Rodrigues Poet Limerick

Brotherly Advice

My teeth they are bright and the dentist glum.
No wonder he perks up at brother’s thumb.
Oh my it is wet.
Poor brother, the threat —
Quit sucking or dentist will brace your gums!

1/9/2019
Limerick Ii Contest/Joseph May

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Alexis Y. January 11, 2019 at 2:29 PM Lol! Kim, You've penned a good for the contest theme. Best wishes:-) Alexis Kim Rodrigues January 11, 2019 at 3:07 PM Thank you, Alexis!

Andrea Dietrich January 10, 2019 at 5:41 PM ha, yes, can you imagine if we all had really good teeth. They would be out of a job. Nicely done. Kim Rodrigues January 10, 2019 at 5:45 PM For sure!

Gershon Wolf January 9, 2019 at 7:45 PM Ha, ha! … and you certainly are a challenge for any dentist with those sparkling teeth and nice smile of yours! :) gw Kim Rodrigues January 9, 2019 at 8:06 PM Thanks...lol!