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Brotherly Advice

My teeth they are bright and the dentist glum. No wonder he perks up at brother’s thumb. Oh my it is wet. Poor brother, the threat — Quit sucking or dentist will brace your gums! 1/9/2019 Limerick Ii Contest/Joseph May

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Alexis Y.

Date: 1/11/2019 2:29:00 PM

Lol! Kim, You've penned a good for the contest theme. Best wishes:-) Alexis

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/11/2019 3:07:00 PM

Thank you, Alexis!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/10/2019 5:41:00 PM

ha, yes, can you imagine if we all had really good teeth. They would be out of a job. Nicely done.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/10/2019 5:45:00 PM

For sure!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/9/2019 7:45:00 PM

Ha, ha! … and you certainly are a challenge for any dentist with those sparkling teeth and nice smile of yours! :) gw

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/9/2019 8:06:00 PM

Thanks...lol!