Brother/Bother

Roughneck
obnoxious when inebriated
brother, precious brother
blessed by God
if only...
ever the first born.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Freeman Avatar
February 6, 2010 at 10:27 AM
Awesome poem on featured this week Doris. Congratulation on this fine piece. Sincerely, love, Moses
Stella Avatar
February 6, 2010 at 5:34 AM
congrats on being featured I was raised with 5 brothers and this fits them to t lol thanks for sharing
Sweetheart Avatar
February 4, 2010 at 7:05 PM
Congrats on your featured poem this week on the Soup... wonderful.. luv.. Linda-Marie
Fisher Avatar
February 2, 2010 at 11:19 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece. Rgds Janette
Fraser Avatar
February 1, 2010 at 1:48 PM
Many congratulations on your poetry being featured this week >> James
Rich Avatar
February 1, 2010 at 5:40 AM
Contrats to you on being featured by PoetrySoup this week. Keep pen and paper on hand & never say never! AR
Brown Avatar
February 1, 2010 at 4:31 AM
Congratulations on your featured poetry this week Doris. May you have many many more. Love, Carol
Cheeseman Avatar
February 1, 2010 at 3:33 AM
Brothers are to be loved, well that's what I keep telling my two sisters , well done Doris Daniel
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January 31, 2010 at 11:41 PM
Congrats on your feature poem this week Doris.Rgds Brian
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January 31, 2010 at 3:13 PM
Congratulations Doris, on having your well-written poem featured this week. It is a very nice "Name" poem, Doris. I'm sure your brother was proud to have a poem written about him. It brings memories and smiles to the mind. Keep writing. Lovingly, Dane
Brown Avatar
August 13, 2009 at 4:14 AM
Precious Acrostic Doris. Thank you for your comments on my poetry. Love, Carol
Kendrick Avatar
August 12, 2009 at 4:44 PM
Nice tribute to brother. Mom
King Avatar
August 12, 2009 at 3:27 PM
Hey,Doris! You're really good at this - Bet Mom's proud of you ...
Fraser Avatar
August 12, 2009 at 2:20 PM
Nice Acrostic Doris>>James
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