Brother Whosoever

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To a dog, an empty hand's cause 
even a well-intentioned one
flinches an involuntary jaw.. 
your neighbor's just the same.

Have you grown leery the open palm?
wearied away as your brother's keeper.
Not responsible to his good name
nor good will as guarded trustee 
over your godchildren.

No blame to you, good sir
or madam-

No right or wrong
by royal decree
monastic or fiduciary..
nor heavy handed scepter
to wield 
relinquished or relished
as monarchal beneficiary.

Just the same, I 
in fealty or name
skeptically question  
right from wrong.. 
guilty as charged
all the day long. 

Often what I read and I see, 
some people scare me
put in my brother's shoes
I probably would too.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 10/1/2023 7:57:00 AM
Wow,great poem. Definetly thought provoking. I like the ending too. Well done. I hope you have a beautiful day :)
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Date: 10/1/2023 7:28:00 AM
This reminds me of Rodin’s famous work…The Thinker!These days in CA and other states,gangs help themselves to gym shores, Apple Products and Gucci bags, no foiodmind you. The food stamp progr is a fraud. Almost anyone who works is eligible.so, do not feel guilty, stealing is a way of life. Dress poorly, roam the streets? No. Give to Bona Fide charities-you are a good man. Just be in action, Pangie xx
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Date: 10/1/2023 2:33:00 AM
Questioning right from wrong is a chore placed on a conscience. Thought provoking lines, Richard.
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