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Poetic Form: Diminished Hexaverse
Inspired: 2024 July 31
Image: N/A
(U)(U)(U)(U)(U)(U)(U)(U)(U)(U)(U)(U)(U)(U)(U)(U)(U)(U)(U)(U)(U)(U)(U)(U)

                    Longboard Surfer Bro
                  Boogie Boarder Bro
               Inner Tuber Bro
                Sandcastle Kid I
                    Sandcastle 2 Knights

                   Rafters Board Longs
               Boarder Boogied
               Sandcast Crabby
              Sun Run To Set

            Boogied Laid
             Sand Pile Up
            Surging Surf

          Footprints
      In The

    SAND

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Date: 8/1/2024 9:31:00 AM
Nice poem from a talented poet. Kudos.
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Hilo Poet
Date: 8/1/2024 10:27:00 AM
Thanks for sharing, Jay.
Date: 8/1/2024 1:06:00 AM
Nicely done. Intriguing poem.
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Hilo Poet
Date: 8/1/2024 1:39:00 AM
Longboard/eldest-NAM, Boogie/2nd eldest-HEART, Inner/youngest-retiring Hilo.

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