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Poetic Form: Diminished Hexaverse
Inspired: 2024 July 31
Image: N/A

Bros of the Sand

(U)(U)(U)(U)(U)(U)(U)(U)(U)(U)(U)(U)(U)(U)(U)(U)(U)(U)(U)(U)(U)(U)(U)(U)

                    Longboard Surfer Bro
                  Boogie Boarder Bro
               Inner Tuber Bro
                Sandcastle Kid I
                    Sandcastle 2 Knights

                   Rafters Board Longs
               Boarder Boogied
               Sandcast Crabby
              Sun Run To Set

            Boogied Laid
             Sand Pile Up
            Surging Surf

          Footprints
      In The

    SAND
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Narain Avatar
August 1, 2024 at 9:31 AM
Nice poem from a talented poet. Kudos.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
August 1, 2024 at 10:27 AM
Thanks for sharing, Jay.
Buhagiar Avatar
August 1, 2024 at 1:06 AM
Nicely done. Intriguing poem.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
August 1, 2024 at 1:39 AM
Longboard/eldest-NAM, Boogie/2nd eldest-HEART, Inner/youngest-retiring Hilo.
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