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Contest by Edward Ibeh

Brooding Nimbus

Brooding Nimbus


           Whirling in vortex of complexity.
               Perplexed mind floating in confusion.
                  Illusion chasing emotive urge
                    directed by self-obsession.

             Dormant desires dominating :
               Feelings failing to rationalise.
              Self -centered mind getting saturated .     
                       Analysis fluctuates.
                  
           Ambition devastated : Frustration followed.      
          Couldn't detect, whether mind is full or hollow.
                Couldn't complete syllabus of life
                   but floating aimless in brooding nimbus.
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