Notes About The Poem
Pick up a title Vol. 37
Contest by Edward Ibeh
Brooding Nimbus
Brooding Nimbus
Whirling in vortex of complexity.
Perplexed mind floating in confusion.
Illusion chasing emotive urge
directed by self-obsession.
Dormant desires dominating :
Feelings failing to rationalise.
Self -centered mind getting saturated .
Analysis fluctuates.
Ambition devastated : Frustration followed.
Couldn't detect, whether mind is full or hollow.
Couldn't complete syllabus of life
but floating aimless in brooding nimbus.
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