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Bronzing In the Sun

The sun fills me with glory and my tank is refreshed, right down to my toes it sinks its vitamins deep, I have often laid and lazily fallen asleep, careful those rays are harshly blessed. Amongst many a bronze goddess I compare, an extra ray here and there would not care, Aphrodite herself would stop and stare, T'was not another English girls affair. Temptous shining like Goddess's do, sat in my shiny beach like mind, staring so blind not knowing quite who are you, quietly reflecting a moment I find. Delicious rays so bright whilst I sit, a quick rest back on the road I find bright, off with a jump and a kick in my wit. Its getting more like an ode. The glittering sun glorious I'm abound ,your yellow your round I think I have found, you fill me up my tank it's not a test, I'm now with mother nature I'm finally blessed

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 9/5/2016 1:58:00 AM
¥eauty. .
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Date: 9/5/2016 1:56:00 AM
I could find your lovely beauty there, shining like a diamond quite rare ~ €nchantun¶ *
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Date: 9/4/2016 7:42:00 PM
Gail, so beautifully written dear lady :)-luloo
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