Phoebe Morakinyo Poet Pantoum

Bronze, Silver and Gold

Bronze, silver and gold
Caught in the sun so light
The momentous reveal of every fight
Wishes we are never told

Caught in the sun so light
Bronze faces contrite
Wishes we are never told
Faces much too bold

Bronze faces contrite
Compared to crinkled green notes
Wishes we are never told
Survival’s fight

Compared to crinkled green notes	
The momentous reveal of every fight
Survival’s fight
Bronze, silver and gold

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Beata Agustin October 14, 2025 at 1:56 AM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Skat A January 30, 2016 at 12:06 PM PHOEBE, A great pleasure to find and read your pen today. Love -- SKAT --

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl September 28, 2012 at 8:22 AM Lovely work, and welcome to the site xx

Carol Sunshine Brown September 26, 2012 at 5:36 AM A belated congratulations on your win in Rhonda and Cyndi's "Penny Pantoums" contest Phoebe. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick September 25, 2012 at 4:58 PM Congrats on your win..Sara

Kash Poet September 25, 2012 at 12:23 PM Very nice Phoebe!Congrats on your win in the contest.

Rena Kiya September 25, 2012 at 11:35 AM this is my 3rd time reading this peace of writing i like it alot am waiting for more please read the rest of my writing it will help you with descrptiveness and imagry manga and anime forever go furries

Ankush Chakrabarty September 20, 2012 at 4:33 PM Amazing style! Loved it :) Phoebe Morakinyo September 21, 2012 at 11:52 AM I'm grateful ;) Thank you :)

Vicky Tsiluma September 20, 2012 at 1:37 AM Lovely write Phoebe! Very well developed! Phoebe Morakinyo September 21, 2012 at 11:52 AM Thank you :) I'm glad :)

Carol Sunshine Brown September 19, 2012 at 11:03 AM A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Phoebe. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol Phoebe Morakinyo September 19, 2012 at 11:05 AM Aww, thank you :) I can't believe everyone here is so nice :)

Rena Kiya September 19, 2012 at 10:53 AM wow this is really good i love your avatar bythe way manga and animae rule and are very addictive i love them you should read my writing i have one called furries all otherwritings iv'e done so far are kind of dark i will be wacthing you postings Phoebe Morakinyo September 19, 2012 at 11:03 AM Thanks :) And thanks again :) I cropped it from a pic I found on the internet. They do! And yes they are addictive, wehen you start you just can't stop... Ooh, I'll check it out, and thanks for watching :) I'm hoping I win the contest because I'm trying to publish a book and I need references (plus I like the idea of poem competitions)

Jon A Cavanaugh September 17, 2012 at 10:02 AM Well done, To me this would be a difficult poetic form. But, you pulled it off so well. I especially enjoyed the line "Wishes we are never told" The wishes others make Phoebe Morakinyo September 18, 2012 at 11:14 AM Thank you, it was really difficult, but I don't really deserve all the credit since I was following a pantuom layout from the internet (I didn't know a pantuom existed till a few days ago) it's nice to know I did ok :)

Terry O'Leary September 16, 2012 at 12:47 PM Very nicely constructed! Terry Phoebe Morakinyo September 16, 2012 at 1:15 PM Thank you :)