Home » Poems » Jenna Logan » Bronze Blush of Sunrise

Bronze Blush of Sunrise

From Heaven's height there was lucent light Spectacular skies in a sanguine sunrise Where peace prevails and men set sails Upon swirling seas with a balmy breeze Dawn displays these dappled days With a florid flush of soft bronze blush A splendid scene, stunningly serene November 10, 2021 Alliterisen - 7 Lines Contest Sponsored by Joseph May Syllable count checked with Howmanysyllbles Sequence #2: 1st line- 9 syllables 2nd line- 11 syllables 3rd line- 8 syllables 4th line- 10 syllables 5th line- 7 syllables 6th line- 9 syllables 7th line- 9 syllables

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Constance La France

Date: 11/30/2021 9:38:00 AM

Jenna, beautiful poem and a big congratulations on your win in Joseph's Alliterisen contest ~ love and serenity _Constance

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 11/30/2021 2:37:00 AM

Such beautiful imagery dear Jenna...Loved it...Congratulations on your win in the contest...Hugs...~ Ani

Jenna Logan
Date: 11/30/2021 4:34:00 AM

Thank you very much, Ani.

Charles Messina

Date: 11/29/2021 4:46:00 PM

Beautiful and stunning, Jenna. Congrats on your 1st place win! Well deserved. Hugs Charlie

Jenna Logan
Date: 11/30/2021 4:33:00 AM

Thank you ever so much, Charlie. Hugs to you, too!

Hilo Poet

Date: 11/29/2021 10:13:00 AM

A wondrous write, Jenna, a first-place winner indeed! My compliments on your righteous endeavor, Aloha!

Jenna Logan
Date: 11/29/2021 10:41:00 AM

I'm so pleased with the honor of a win and with your kind compliments, William. Thanks so much.

Joseph May

Date: 11/29/2021 6:57:00 AM

"With a florid flush of soft bronze blush", Wonderful write Jenna, Congrats on your win

Jenna Logan
Date: 11/29/2021 10:41:00 AM

Thank you so very much for the honor, Joseph.

John Lawless

Date: 11/10/2021 9:39:00 AM

Beautifully done Jenna. Dappled with alliteration and the mystery of the sea. I'm still trying to figure out the math involved with the form.

Jenna Logan
Date: 11/10/2021 6:04:00 PM

lol It's the number of syllables per line, but it's explained in the rules. Thank you for liking this one, John.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/10/2021 8:48:00 AM

Wonderful write. Great alliteration. Thanks for your past comments on my poems.

Jenna Logan
Date: 11/10/2021 6:03:00 PM

You're welcome, Victor, and thanks to you for all of yours as well.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 11/10/2021 7:49:00 AM

Jenna, this is a splendid write. I really enjoyed reading it, and the illustration is stunning. Best wishes in the contest.

Jenna Logan
Date: 11/10/2021 6:02:00 PM

My gratefulness to you on both counts, Milt. Thanks.

Mike Bayles

Date: 11/10/2021 7:39:00 AM

Jenna, I really enjoyed this poem. Great alliteration.

Jenna Logan
Date: 11/10/2021 6:02:00 PM

Thanks ever so much, Mike.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 11/10/2021 7:32:00 AM

Amazing write. I so love it. Beautiful... love the rhymes. Sublime. God bless you my friend. Love, Gina

Jenna Logan
Date: 11/10/2021 6:01:00 PM

Thank you sooooo much, Gina.

Mike Gentile

Date: 11/10/2021 7:23:00 AM

I love this Jenna! The alliteration really enhances the scene which can be difficult to achieve, you've done it splendidly!

Jenna Logan
Date: 11/10/2021 7:25:00 AM

I am delighted with your assessment, Mike. Thanks for such a fine review.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/10/2021 7:18:00 AM

Love that, the bronze blush of sunrise, your pen has been busy Jenna, Good luck in the contest. Tom

Jenna Logan
Date: 11/10/2021 7:25:00 AM

Thank you so very much for such gracious comments, Tom. Hugs.