Jenna Logan Poet Verse

Bronze Blush of Sunrise

From Heaven's height there was lucent light  
Spectacular skies in a sanguine sunrise 
Where peace prevails and men set sails    
Upon swirling seas with a balmy breeze  
Dawn displays these dappled days  
With a florid flush of soft bronze blush    
A splendid scene, stunningly serene  



November 10, 2021
Alliterisen - 7 Lines Contest
Sponsored by Joseph May
Syllable count checked with Howmanysyllbles
Sequence #2:
1st line- 9 syllables
2nd line- 11 syllables
3rd line- 8 syllables
4th line- 10 syllables
5th line- 7 syllables
6th line- 9 syllables
7th line- 9 syllables

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Constance La France November 30, 2021 at 9:38 AM Jenna, beautiful poem and a big congratulations on your win in Joseph's Alliterisen contest ~ love and serenity _Constance

Anitha Jayasankar November 30, 2021 at 2:37 AM Such beautiful imagery dear Jenna...Loved it...Congratulations on your win in the contest...Hugs...~ Ani Jenna Logan November 30, 2021 at 4:34 AM Thank you very much, Ani.

Charles Messina November 29, 2021 at 4:46 PM Beautiful and stunning, Jenna. Congrats on your 1st place win! Well deserved. Hugs Charlie Jenna Logan November 30, 2021 at 4:33 AM Thank you ever so much, Charlie. Hugs to you, too!

William Kelii Kekaula November 29, 2021 at 10:13 AM A wondrous write, Jenna, a first-place winner indeed! My compliments on your righteous endeavor, Aloha! Jenna Logan November 29, 2021 at 10:41 AM I'm so pleased with the honor of a win and with your kind compliments, William. Thanks so much.

Joseph May November 29, 2021 at 6:57 AM "With a florid flush of soft bronze blush", Wonderful write Jenna, Congrats on your win Jenna Logan November 29, 2021 at 10:41 AM Thank you so very much for the honor, Joseph.

John Lawless November 10, 2021 at 9:39 AM Beautifully done Jenna. Dappled with alliteration and the mystery of the sea. I'm still trying to figure out the math involved with the form. Jenna Logan November 10, 2021 at 6:04 PM lol It's the number of syllables per line, but it's explained in the rules. Thank you for liking this one, John.

Victor Buhagiar November 10, 2021 at 8:48 AM Wonderful write. Great alliteration. Thanks for your past comments on my poems. Jenna Logan November 10, 2021 at 6:03 PM You're welcome, Victor, and thanks to you for all of yours as well.

L Milton Hankins November 10, 2021 at 7:49 AM Jenna, this is a splendid write. I really enjoyed reading it, and the illustration is stunning. Best wishes in the contest. Jenna Logan November 10, 2021 at 6:02 PM My gratefulness to you on both counts, Milt. Thanks.

Mike Bayles November 10, 2021 at 7:39 AM Jenna, I really enjoyed this poem. Great alliteration. Jenna Logan November 10, 2021 at 6:02 PM Thanks ever so much, Mike.

Regina Mcintosh November 10, 2021 at 7:32 AM Amazing write. I so love it. Beautiful... love the rhymes. Sublime. God bless you my friend. Love, Gina Jenna Logan November 10, 2021 at 6:01 PM Thank you sooooo much, Gina.

Mike Gentile November 10, 2021 at 7:23 AM I love this Jenna! The alliteration really enhances the scene which can be difficult to achieve, you've done it splendidly! Jenna Logan November 10, 2021 at 7:25 AM I am delighted with your assessment, Mike. Thanks for such a fine review.

Tom Cunningham November 10, 2021 at 7:18 AM Love that, the bronze blush of sunrise, your pen has been busy Jenna, Good luck in the contest. Tom Jenna Logan November 10, 2021 at 7:25 AM Thank you so very much for such gracious comments, Tom. Hugs.