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Bronze Blush of Sunrise

From Heaven's height there was lucent light  
Spectacular skies in a sanguine sunrise 
Where peace prevails and men set sails    
Upon swirling seas with a balmy breeze  
Dawn displays these dappled days  
With a florid flush of soft bronze blush    
A splendid scene, stunningly serene  



November 10, 2021
Alliterisen - 7 Lines Contest
Sponsored by Joseph May
Syllable count checked with Howmanysyllbles
Sequence #2:
1st line- 9 syllables
2nd line- 11 syllables
3rd line- 8 syllables
4th line- 10 syllables
5th line- 7 syllables
6th line- 9 syllables
7th line- 9 syllables

Copyright © Jenna Logan | Year Posted 2021

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Constance La France Date: 11/30/2021 9:38:00 AM Jenna, beautiful poem and a big congratulations on your win in Joseph's Alliterisen contest ~ love and serenity _Constance Login to Reply

Anitha Jayasankar Date: 11/30/2021 2:37:00 AM Such beautiful imagery dear Jenna...Loved it...Congratulations on your win in the contest...Hugs...~ Ani Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 11/30/2021 4:34:00 AM Thank you very much, Ani.

Charles Messina Date: 11/29/2021 4:46:00 PM Beautiful and stunning, Jenna. Congrats on your 1st place win! Well deserved. Hugs Charlie Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 11/30/2021 4:33:00 AM Thank you ever so much, Charlie. Hugs to you, too!

Hilo Poet Date: 11/29/2021 10:13:00 AM A wondrous write, Jenna, a first-place winner indeed! My compliments on your righteous endeavor, Aloha! Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 11/29/2021 10:41:00 AM I'm so pleased with the honor of a win and with your kind compliments, William. Thanks so much.

Joseph May Date: 11/29/2021 6:57:00 AM "With a florid flush of soft bronze blush", Wonderful write Jenna, Congrats on your win Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 11/29/2021 10:41:00 AM Thank you so very much for the honor, Joseph.

John Lawless Date: 11/10/2021 9:39:00 AM Beautifully done Jenna. Dappled with alliteration and the mystery of the sea. I'm still trying to figure out the math involved with the form. Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 11/10/2021 6:04:00 PM lol It's the number of syllables per line, but it's explained in the rules. Thank you for liking this one, John.

Victor Buhagiar Date: 11/10/2021 8:48:00 AM Wonderful write. Great alliteration. Thanks for your past comments on my poems. Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 11/10/2021 6:03:00 PM You're welcome, Victor, and thanks to you for all of yours as well.

L Milton Hankins Date: 11/10/2021 7:49:00 AM Jenna, this is a splendid write. I really enjoyed reading it, and the illustration is stunning. Best wishes in the contest. Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 11/10/2021 6:02:00 PM My gratefulness to you on both counts, Milt. Thanks.

Mike Bayles Date: 11/10/2021 7:39:00 AM Jenna, I really enjoyed this poem. Great alliteration. Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 11/10/2021 6:02:00 PM Thanks ever so much, Mike.

Regina Mcintosh Date: 11/10/2021 7:32:00 AM Amazing write. I so love it. Beautiful... love the rhymes. Sublime. God bless you my friend. Love, Gina Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 11/10/2021 6:01:00 PM Thank you sooooo much, Gina.

Mike Gentile Date: 11/10/2021 7:23:00 AM I love this Jenna! The alliteration really enhances the scene which can be difficult to achieve, you've done it splendidly! Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 11/10/2021 7:25:00 AM I am delighted with your assessment, Mike. Thanks for such a fine review.

Tom Cunningham Date: 11/10/2021 7:18:00 AM Love that, the bronze blush of sunrise, your pen has been busy Jenna, Good luck in the contest. Tom Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 11/10/2021 7:25:00 AM Thank you so very much for such gracious comments, Tom. Hugs.