Bronze Beauty

Tired and giving way Seasonal beauty still seen Drifting, drifting down... For Raul's latest...

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John Freeman

Date: 4/23/2010 6:43:00 PM

Congratulations Barbara, on your success in Raul's contest. Agape, Moses

Date: 4/23/2010 12:32:00 PM

I like the feel of this one. Fitting title. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Raul's contest. Enjoy your success. Wishing you many more. Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/23/2010 6:32:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's Descending Grace contest Barbara. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/23/2010 6:27:00 AM

Congrats BG on your winning poem in Raul's contest... wonderful words to depict the photo..enjoy..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/22/2010 11:52:00 PM

Congratulations on your success, fellow LNC!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/22/2010 11:33:00 PM

Congrats for the win.

Raul Moreno

Date: 4/22/2010 11:22:00 PM

BG, congratulations on your success in my contest...Raul

Rick Parise

Date: 4/22/2010 7:25:00 PM

I really enjoy this one !!a top list finisher I believe!!!!!!!!Nice~~~~~~Rick

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/22/2010 6:49:00 PM

Very nicely done, LNC. And surely you look better than that leaf!! LOL We all start "drifting down" as the years pass, but our spirits will rise again. I'm back! And I want to toss some mullet. Love, Carolyn