Bronze Beauty

Tired and giving way

Seasonal beauty still seen

Drifting, drifting down...


For Raul's latest...
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Freeman Avatar
April 23, 2010 at 6:43 PM
Congratulations Barbara, on your success in Raul's contest. Agape, Moses
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April 23, 2010 at 12:32 PM
I like the feel of this one. Fitting title. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Raul's contest. Enjoy your success. Wishing you many more. Karen
Brown Avatar
April 23, 2010 at 6:32 AM
Congratulations on your win in Raul's Descending Grace contest Barbara. Love, Carol
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April 23, 2010 at 6:27 AM
Congrats BG on your winning poem in Raul's contest... wonderful words to depict the photo..enjoy..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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April 22, 2010 at 11:52 PM
Congratulations on your success, fellow LNC!
Mehta Avatar
April 22, 2010 at 11:33 PM
Congrats for the win.
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April 22, 2010 at 11:22 PM
BG, congratulations on your success in my contest...Raul
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April 22, 2010 at 6:49 PM
Very nicely done, LNC. And surely you look better than that leaf!! LOL We all start "drifting down" as the years pass, but our spirits will rise again. I'm back! And I want to toss some mullet. Love, Carolyn
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