Hgarvey Daniel Esquire Poet Concrete

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Hello Soupers, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. I am back home with the SOUPERS I LOVE.. To those of YOU who have not read this before, YOU  can read each line vertically or the Left side first than the Right side. Thank-YOU LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...HG

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..................   L  I                                  L  O
                Y            F                       Y             V                         
           M         H        E                M        G           E                
       F   O   R   E  V  E  R             E   T   E   R  N    A   L                    
     L     E    N    O    R    E          L     E    N    O    R     E
  E   N   T   W   I   N   E   D       E   N   T   W   I  N   E   D
 Always  with  my HearT  I         Always with true Feeling
Love You, my Dearest WIFE        ALWAYS with Emotions
My  Love grows like an oak        My  Heart beats for YOU
Mighty  and E v e r l a s t I n g       MY  TEARS  are  Real 
 YOU  are  M Y  STRENGTH         Yet My Heart still Aches
  FOR YOU LIVE in  ME            Though You live with GOD
   ETERNAL  B L I S S        YOU wear the gown of Angels
     INFINITE  P U R E        YOU carry my Heart in Yours
       You grow in my heart     EACH  and   EVERY   Day 
         The LOVE grows and   I am at  Peace KNOWING
            As  LOVE  Grows          In my  BROKEN Heart 
              Constantly Knitting        cracks and Fissures
                My  Dearest Beloved    Tenderly  Mended
                    Repairing Loneliness   My Wife Lenore
                       Angelically Smiles   Eternally Loved
                          MY Only Most        B E L O V E D
                              L  I  F  E        L  E  N  O  R  E
                                  Always      F O R E V E R
                                      YOU    My  Heartbeat
                                          Are   My   S O U L
                                              MY      W I F E
                                                One  Breath
                                                    N e v e r
                                                      Alone
                                                      YOU
                                                       And
                                                          I

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen December 27, 2016 at 7:41 AM Beautiful shape poem. You love for Lenore is eternal.

Funom Makama March 2, 2016 at 8:44 AM What a lovely page with a profound group of words. I am loving every aspect of this piece. Thumbs up friend and a definite 7

Skat A December 20, 2015 at 6:30 PM Hi Daniel,, stopped by to enjoy some of the best poems and poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~

Poet Destroyer A September 3, 2015 at 12:15 PM the sweetest thing i've read today:), very much enjoyed this one

Paul Callus September 1, 2015 at 3:49 PM Wow! This is truly romantic, both in content and presentation! A broken heart, showing the split caused by her passing away...yet whole in loving spirit....a love that will never end. ~ All the best. // paul Hgarvey Daniel Esquire September 1, 2015 at 7:52 PM Dear Paul, Thank-YOU very much and Yes it is a LOVE that will continue for the EONS of FOREVER. LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege ...HG

Eve Roper August 16, 2015 at 7:03 PM Such a beautiful poem and the shape is creative. a 7 hugs Eve Hgarvey Daniel Esquire September 1, 2015 at 7:58 PM Dear Eve, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit Thank-YOU for YOUR Gracious Comment. I also have an Hour Glass shape POEM about Lenore. LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...HG

Richard Lamoureux August 15, 2015 at 7:52 AM This takes some effort to read but that adds to the experience. This is literally the best shape poem that I have read. I hope your wife has not passed if he has please except my condolences. Better to have a broken heart than to have never experienced such an abiding love. I see at the end you are both still joined. Hgarvey Daniel Esquire August 30, 2015 at 9:50 PM Dear Richard, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. My Wife, My Heartbeat, My Life, LENORE went home to GLORY 44 years ago August 25th. Thank-YOU for YOUR Condolences. Most of my POEMS are about LENORE. LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...HG

James Horn August 13, 2015 at 7:54 AM This could represent two feet as well as a heart indicating you both are going on same paths and also love each other so much. Jim Horn.

James Peranteau August 12, 2015 at 11:32 PM Wow ! This tops all concrete that I've read dear poet ! What a lover you are my friend ! God bless you....have a wonderful week sir...much love, james

Laura Breidenthal August 12, 2015 at 12:44 AM This is outstanding!!!Always, Laura

Jan Allison July 31, 2015 at 5:35 PM WOW WOW -HG this is truly a heartbreaking write - the concrete form is simply perfect - Lenore will forever be in your heart :-) hugs Jan xx