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Broken Woman

Yes I've had my UPS and downs My smiles and frowns I've been talked about and torn down Yes I'm a broken woman It takes all for someone to love someone as broken as me But with me is where he wants to be I've been lied on and cheated on Used and abused Was I afraid he was going to do it to me yes Because I am a broken woman I never thought I could ever love again even worst allow another man to Become my best friend But look at me I'm smiling in happy I'm loving him deeply And the best part about it he loves me back Broken woman and all

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/14/2016 1:13:00 PM

- Thank you for your first poem, Hailfair :) - I welcome you to Poetry Soup :) - Hope you will find our "soup" friendly and fun - Good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Skat A

Date: 3/12/2016 9:59:00 PM

hailfair Williams, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/8/2016 11:19:00 PM

Hailfair, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@