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Broken Wings

An injured bird falls to depths of a giant tree birdie watches helplessly. Man rushes to help picks up bird with folded knees, both of his arms are missing. November 6, 2017

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/4/2023 9:38:00 AM

So much love for the fallen is within this wounded warrior. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. If only all people could love like the person of whom you speak in your lines. Sara

James Swartz

Date: 11/11/2017 3:44:00 AM

Ha! You have summed up my luck perfectly in this poem Vijay! Either if I need help or I need to help there are always issues. Very great poem!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/11/2017 5:38:00 AM

Thank you James!

Janice Canerdy

Date: 11/8/2017 9:14:00 PM

What wonderful theme you've conveyed here, Vijay! Janice

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/9/2017 6:47:00 AM

Thank you Janice!

Winged Warrior

Date: 11/8/2017 5:07:00 AM

Very well crafted Vijay...great Sedoka...^WW^

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/8/2017 5:49:00 AM

Thank you WW! Sorry for your loss--my thoughts and prayers are with you!

Maria Williams

Date: 11/8/2017 4:15:00 AM

A deep and thought provoking poem my friend. Powerful indeed...Maria

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/8/2017 5:48:00 AM

Thank you Maria!

James Inman

Date: 11/8/2017 2:06:00 AM

A well written short write, sad but beautiful.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/8/2017 5:47:00 AM

Thank you James!

Susan Ashley

Date: 11/7/2017 5:31:00 PM

Vijay, powerful yet gentle sentiments so artistically expressed.., takes my breath away.. ~Susan

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/7/2017 5:54:00 PM

Thank you Susan!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/7/2017 2:52:00 PM

The injured seem to be the most caring! Lovely sentiment!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/7/2017 4:25:00 PM

Thanks Kim!

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 11/7/2017 10:48:00 AM

I agree w/SO. Very deep write, Vijay. The depth of humanity shown by your revealing pen is breathtaking. Thought provoking poetry. Love and joy always.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/7/2017 10:50:00 AM

Thank you Freddie!

Silent One

Date: 11/7/2017 9:06:00 AM

Very deep Vijay..

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/7/2017 10:50:00 AM

Thank you Silent One!

Patricia Cresswell

Date: 11/6/2017 5:48:00 PM

Oh Vijay your poem has struck me deeply it brings tears because it is so true. Those of with the least give the most. I am going to put this in my treasure box. Thank you for the gentle lesson.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/6/2017 6:28:00 PM

A agree with the sentiments you express--many thanks Patricia for your visit and comments!