Broken Wings

As the sun arose in the eastern skies 
a fairy princess sits rubbing her eyes.
Yawning she glimpses her magical isle 
and her tiny lips, curl into a smile.

Standing she stretches in her treetop bed,
anxious anticipates what lies ahead.
She flutters her wings to get them ready,
raising one knee, she jumps slow and steady.

Hovering like, a hummingbird she glides
then races off with both arms at her sides.
With lots to see her day has just begun,
she never stops until the setting sun.

Racing through the forest over fields of wheat
smelling the flowers, is her daily treat.
Talks to the butterflies this sunny morn,
tests the fresh honey and tastes some sweet corn.

Spotting a pond sparkling like a mirror 
zooms back and forth each time getting nearer,
watching her reflection, no time to think
crashed in a deer who had just stopped to drink.

Later discovers she’s broken her wings,
Lies in bed knowing what carelessness brings.
Six months of bed rest was taking their toll,
this fairy princess was losing her soul.

Finally the day came to test her wings
her will is determined her heart now sings,
shouts out with joy as she reaches the sky,
nothing feels greater, than when you can fly.

Iambic Pentameter 
Written by Brenda Meier-Hans 
01.14.2015
Contest: Sketch a Fictitious Character II
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Agustin Avatar
May 23, 2024 at 1:43 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Edmonds  Avatar
March 6, 2021 at 5:18 AM
Simply beautiful!!!
Roper Avatar
December 13, 2017 at 11:36 PM
Beautiful, :)
Curtis Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 6:50 AM
I miss you too
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 5:07 PM
I miss you and your poetry my fair lady! Hugs, Connie
A   Avatar
February 12, 2016 at 11:17 PM
BRENDA, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
Nance Avatar
January 23, 2016 at 1:32 PM
Love this poem and missing you Brenda. hugs
Peterson Avatar
July 18, 2015 at 7:13 PM
What a magical journey this conveys. I'm so glad these were the kind of broken wings that would heal.
Sibanda Avatar
May 30, 2015 at 10:23 AM
Great piece of art!!
Guzzi Avatar
April 27, 2015 at 8:18 AM
Awwwwwww don't we all love the idea of fairies! Light & Love
Mumo Avatar
April 17, 2015 at 6:14 AM
I thoroughly like this poem to the innermost bone. This is rare skill! 7+++++!
Cee Avatar
April 13, 2015 at 8:57 AM
such an amazing work :) loved happy to be back here after one year, invited u to read my PYRAMID. bless u
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
April 12, 2015 at 9:02 PM
Hi Brenda, stopping by to read your charming poem again. I hope to read something new from you soon...hugs, Rhonda
Onclaud Avatar
April 12, 2015 at 12:30 PM
magical impressions, brenda.. i like this!.. hugggs
La France Avatar
April 11, 2015 at 8:42 PM
Brenda, what a pretty poem you have penned,7, I so enjoyed reading this write that is also my username, how lovely, and thanks for visiting my Captcha poem
Pinet Avatar
April 11, 2015 at 2:49 PM
Your poem takes the essence of dreams loved by young and old and distills the magic into a happy feel good poem that flaunts reality and has fun with our desires to be entertained by thoughts of wonder. Emile. #7
Yvonne Avatar
April 10, 2015 at 8:36 AM
This was a masterful write and a wonderful story in fact magical. This poem is part of my fav list.
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
April 8, 2015 at 8:39 AM
Such beautiful and well-written poem..:)! it took my breath away that I shall fave this.. :)! how are you Brenda? hope you are doing well.. :)!//olive eloisa sending you some hugs.. :)!
Bally Avatar
April 7, 2015 at 11:25 PM
Adorable & well-written, every nice for kids also .
Callus Avatar
March 21, 2015 at 5:44 PM
Hi Brenda...dropped in just to say hello, hoping all is well. Missed your presence and writes. Take care. // paul
Smith Avatar
February 15, 2015 at 2:20 PM
Absolutely adorable, and the rhythm and flow is top notch!! Hugs.. Arlene
Mcdaid Avatar
February 5, 2015 at 7:03 PM
very beautifully painted piece brenda excellent pen dear friend
Callus Avatar
February 1, 2015 at 12:52 PM
Congratulations on a delightful poem in iambic pentameter, Brenda. You make a very good story teller! Hope you are keeping well....have not seen much of you lately:) Take care. // paul
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January 23, 2015 at 10:00 AM
This is truly a magical piece Brenda! This could be turned into a children's book.
Hamilton Avatar
January 23, 2015 at 3:32 AM
I love this pen Brenda you have not been around much are you still having PC troubles? Have missed you and your lovely poems hugs 7 + fav
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