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Broken Wings

Sensation of your words in their spoken place Sincerity behind your "I will always be there". An ear for everyone-you've no time to rest Everyones burden you barely carry..but, On Broken Wings No time to heal from a past that's your present Tho' you delight in the transition of others Take an earnest look over the horizon It's a new days dawning- Heal thyself Of Broken Wings As the eagle, stand and stretch thy wings Shake off the things that prevent your very flight Things that have moltened themselves to you. Fly..fly..soar above all which you are acquainted Higher than you have ever been before..Heal Your Broken Wings.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/10/2012 10:02:00 PM
'valerie, this is neat.It has the look of a rondeau!! I bet it would be great in that form as well. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 1/10/2012 11:13:00 AM
An enchanting poem, Sherman. I am particularly impressed by the appropriate use of Broken Wings in the concluding line of each stanza of the poem. -Mohammad
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Valerie Sherman
Date: 1/10/2012 11:52:00 AM
Mohammad, your comment is appreciated
Date: 1/10/2012 10:05:00 AM
It seems we are the last ones to heal...Nice write. Thanks for sharing. Jodie Q
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Valerie Sherman
Date: 1/10/2012 10:10:00 AM
You're correct Jod!e..we are, thanks

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