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Broken Wings

i feel sad, but i cant express.. i feel bad, but inside i press... the pain of my broken wings, i try to fly.. but i fall, i cannot win.. i hope u were here, helping me up.. holding my hands, teachin me back up... for i am no god, i cant bring back.. the happy moments, and the touch of your hands... the pain of my broken wings, i try to fly.. but i fall, i cannot win.. the beauty of life, i havent seen yet.. i have a vision, of a long way ahead... was it my dream, when i saw your face?? was it a lie, when i heard u speak? the pain lingers, in my heart... my broken wings... waiting for your touch to be heal...

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Date: 1/1/2016 11:04:00 AM
Angelina, pleasure to read :) HAVE YOURSELF A HAPPY January 1st. ...... SKAT
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Date: 6/3/2012 1:50:00 AM
hi, Angelina! It's good to find someone from the land I belong out here sharing poems with all. The poem strikes a chord but do keep an eye on punctuation too. Keep it up, buddy and I do hope your someone will come to heal you someday. This is life... -Panthoiren
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Angelina Tongbram
Date: 10/27/2012 10:56:00 AM
i'll sure keep that in mind and write better.. :) thanx for ur advice sir..
Date: 5/11/2012 11:17:00 PM
a warm thanking to u dear sir and miss.. :) i write poems for expressing my feelings... makes me feel light... and thanx a lot for ur good comments n warm welcome.. :)
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Date: 11/25/2011 11:54:00 PM
welcome to poetry soup . Nice poem, the way u express the pain and feelings is realy remarkable. Keep it up.
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Angelina Tongbram
Date: 5/11/2012 11:18:00 PM
thank u sir.. :)
Date: 11/22/2011 5:38:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today Angelina. I am sorry to be late welcoming you. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Angelina Tongbram
Date: 5/11/2012 11:19:00 PM
thank you ma'am.. :)
Date: 11/21/2011 9:05:00 PM
Lovely write with lyrical quality and good rhyming too, angelina
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