Broken Wing Ruse

With broken wing

She tried to fly

A broken wing

The ruse she tried

On broken wing

The sigh, it died

For broken wing

Her lover cried


12Mar14
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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O'Leary Avatar
March 13, 2014 at 1:56 PM
Hi r, I've read this elsewhere but was happy to read it again, here... Terry (& thanks for your kind words)
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March 12, 2014 at 12:19 PM
This poem flows flawlessly. It's short and simple and quite beautiful. I enjoyed it very much. Kudos! :)
Richardson Avatar
March 12, 2014 at 12:22 PM
Thank you, JTAP.
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