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Broken Wing

Broken wing
Of the blue butterfly

Broken wing
Falling, falling

There high above in the clouds
Up there in the shining great sun

The lone full butterfly flutters
Struggling to float above us all

Tumbling down
Tumbling downwards toward the ground

I the maggot, witness it all
As the butterfly so broken

Falls upon my back
Fate saved the butterfly that day

The warmth of her heart
Gave me the maggot, majestic wings

Reborn and strong was I
I carried her upon my back

We soared again on high
Broken spirits In clouds of misty love

She saw beauty in the mud
I saw beauty in the broken

We, the ones who fly
Where overcome

My tears of joy at this winged dance of love
Weighed heavily on us

We drowned inside these love drops
The maggot and the butterfly

We made a timeless grand love story
For this we paid the price and died




In a graveyard of tears
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Smith Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 7:31 PM
A beautiful tragic poem Arthur...a nice energy : )
May Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 7:03 PM
You take the butterfly on a melancholy flight..nicely penned Arthur
Dietrich Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 6:21 PM
what a grand tale created by the inspiration of broken wings!! I agree with Jan maggots are so creepy!! It ended up being like phantom of the opera or something.
Vaso Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 6:56 PM
Thanks Andrea and I just realized yes Phantom of the opera it is!
Allison Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 9:03 AM
Gosh I can see you have been inspired by Broken Wings - would prefer caterpillars rather than a maggots as I associate maggots with death and decay but on this occasion it suits the subject:-) hugs Jan xx
Vaso Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 6:55 PM
I am the ugly one! or as we say here the Fat Dancer.
Mark Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 6:33 AM
probably the finest piece ive read for a long while ,..it has an energy of its own that engages and suffocates at the same time ,..well done
Barry Avatar
March 26, 2016 at 10:40 PM
Sad and sweet Arthur.
Vaso Avatar
March 26, 2016 at 10:43 PM
Thank you, inspired by Broken Wings here! :)
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