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Broken Vows

sketch of love pastel blue vows were untrue you stole my heart then walked out of my life left me all alone, a rejected wife You told me lies alibis sorrow pain heart mending from the ache no pretending no 'happily ever after ending' 7/20/2016 Triple Tetractys Contest-Eve Roper

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/25/2016 2:54:00 PM

Your Triple Tetractys poem was awesome, creative and unique..Congratulations on your placement..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/22/2016 5:47:00 PM

great win for a great write, Marti. Congratulations!

Jan Allison

Date: 7/22/2016 3:22:00 PM

heartfelt write Marti - I think quite a few people will be able to relate to relate to your sad lines:-( congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight

Date: 7/21/2016 6:20:00 AM

Very emotional and well-written, Marti. And the rhyme does add to the wonderful flow. Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/20/2016 5:33:00 PM

marti, solemn in its pained whisper with imagery finely done... grrreat share!; huggs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/20/2016 3:35:00 PM

I really like how you did your entry for this contest. One of the better ones I have seen. So flowing, Marti.