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Broken Unsayable

a strange world after life in the womb eager to grow , curious to see, running on energy the bell tolls as the pages turn battered by weather and wrinkled broken teeth, broken heart, deaf ears, soul all unrecognizable Growing old broken! 11/23/2017

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Faye Gibson

Date: 12/2/2017 11:24:00 AM

You have written a lovely, sweetly sad image. Beautiful. Congratulations

Rob Carmack

Date: 12/2/2017 1:47:00 AM

Those pages keep turning faster and faster. Congrats on your win.

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/1/2017 2:14:00 PM

Eve, returning with congratulations on your win with your amazing poem. Warmest regards. ~Susan

Paul Callus

Date: 12/1/2017 10:08:00 AM

You could not have expressed it any better, Eve! The most we can do is patching up, but eventually tear & wear will have their say:) Congratulations on your high-flying win. Hugs // paul

Joseph May

Date: 11/30/2017 2:49:00 PM

Glad your muse isn't broken..Congrats on your win

Winged Warrior

Date: 11/27/2017 5:00:00 AM

Very nicely penned my friend...growing old sucks lol...especially when you have broken teeth lol...god bless...^WW^

Susan Ashley

Date: 11/26/2017 9:55:00 PM

Wow! Eve, such a striking and beautifully expressed poem. I love the contrast between the first and second stanza, and the ominous tone of foreshadowing in your third line.. This is a stirring and soul-baring write.. best wishes for a win ~Susan

Akkina Downing

Date: 11/26/2017 5:24:00 PM

Oh this is fabulous. A winner to me. But still wishing you good luck in the contest :) hugs and smiles :)

Silent One

Date: 11/26/2017 4:24:00 AM

You did this very well.. Good luck in the contest..

Arthur Vaso

Date: 11/26/2017 2:10:00 AM

Eve, this is a fav and one of the best poems I have read lately, loved this!

Jack Horne

Date: 11/25/2017 2:42:00 PM

very powerful - a surefire winner

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/25/2017 10:38:00 AM

Oh Eve. it's so sadly true in many cases. I love your take on the theme. You did this very well!!

Eve Roper
Date: 11/25/2017 1:04:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea,

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/24/2017 7:06:00 AM

An apt imagery of aging--sometimes an unsayable journey--well depicted--best for a win, Eve!

Eve Roper
Date: 11/24/2017 10:18:00 AM

Thank you hugs eve

CayCay Jennings

Date: 11/23/2017 11:06:00 PM

How dramatic, Eve! This is raw, gritty and heavy. Very good writing. It is so hard hitting that I must go read the contest, you have me intrigued. Whatever it stipulates, this is a winner to me. Hugs (so good to read you again, its hard catching up!) ... CayCay

Eve Roper
Date: 11/24/2017 10:16:00 AM

Thank you, Cay Cay, I'm not truly sure of the process, but had to write it. Hate getting old!