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Broken Ties

Today my heart is aching for the woman in my dreams she's to far to touch, shes to far see decisions of the heart it should of been mistakes of time and ignorance regrets of all the things that should have been Tomorrow my heart breaks for the woman in my dreams for a woman that has always been her elegance and beaty that of the stars seductive as a devil with all of her charm her lips so moist and full of life only a fool would think twice Forever I cry for the woman I love A broken proposal that mocks all time Bare skin wear a diamond should lie but there it sits in a box all alone waiting for the day she calls it back home before I die it will sit yet again On the angles hand, the woman I love

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/20/2014 9:50:00 AM
Matthew,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, "WINTER POEMS" in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I look forward to following you and your poetry:) Enjoy the Christmas Holidays! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 12/20/2014 8:02:00 AM
- Welcome to P - Soup !!!! .... A Christmas smile two you :) - I wish you and your family a peaceful and lovely Christmas - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/19/2014 1:40:00 AM
Beautiful pen Matthew! truly loved reading your sad but well written piece, dear friend. A 7 for you! I wish you a very Merry Christmas! :) Love and hugs! xxxx D.
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Matthew Burt
Date: 12/19/2014 9:55:00 AM
Thank you for reading my poem. I appreciate the comments. Thanks

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