Broken Sleep

Broken sleep
With colorful dreams
More cautious 
Spends more time 
With a mirror and comb 
What happens
Am I falling in love ?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Grisetti Avatar
June 19, 2012 at 9:37 AM
This almost sounds like a haiku, short and to the point. Look forward to reading more of your work.
Chakrapany Avatar
June 19, 2012 at 9:57 AM
thanks .jk
Sathasivam Avatar
June 16, 2012 at 6:00 AM
Amazing. Well Said. Tfs
Chakrapany Avatar
June 16, 2012 at 6:39 AM
thank you .jk
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