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Broken Sleep

Broken sleep With colorful dreams More cautious Spends more time With a mirror and comb What happens Am I falling in love ?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/19/2012 9:37:00 AM
This almost sounds like a haiku, short and to the point. Look forward to reading more of your work.
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Jayachandran Chakrapany
Date: 6/19/2012 9:57:00 AM
thanks .jk
Date: 6/16/2012 6:00:00 AM
Amazing. Well Said. Tfs
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Jayachandran Chakrapany
Date: 6/16/2012 6:39:00 AM
thank you .jk

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