Broken: She Thought She Wasn'T Beautiful

Dressed in rag with a face of stone, 
A smile you would ignore,
Was all she thought she ever was, 
Was all she ever saw,

But to me she dressed in sheets of velvet, 
She sauntered through the air,
To me she was perfect every way, 
Her smile, her eyes, her hair,

She even filled her words with magic, 
They danced inside my mind,
Her voice gripped all I ever was, 
Her voice had me resigned,

This woman I knew who didn’t know, 
Who thought she was the plainest sight,
Still visits my dreams when I’m asleep, 
Every single night.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Zacharias Avatar
April 13, 2020 at 3:44 PM
You speak of feelings I have had myself, and you remind me of the profound effect we have on others like your poem upon me today. I loved it.
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 6, 2020 at 1:29 PM
Hello Lewis Raynes, all women are beautiful inside and out. Enjoy your day my friend. Stay safe.
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