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Broken Reflection

Silent persistence peeling skin from bone With undamaged precision Easing an imperceptible knife into flesh Exposing a fragile heart Stripped with naked vulnerability Surrendering willingly to anaesthetized hands Craving achingly raw excision Clouded with hope filled desperation A lullaby of forged belief Eyes fixated on the gentle thudding of beating Echoing from fading warmth between palms Subconsciously awaiting unavoidable regret Intensely flaming pain searing through a bruised, empty cavity Antagonistic fingers familiarly penetrating, ripping apart A heart eager to love, drenched in gullibility Opening bleeding wounds along already scarred edges Leaving torn pieces distraughtly scattered Bloodied feeling slowly draining Wisps of past shadowed ghosts Self-encouraged to plague again Evaporating out of void eyes Ravaging reflected destruction Self condemned through the hands of a mere puppet Shameful pain piecing brokenness back together Cradling the fading beauty in shrouds of detestation Dissipating into silence Drowning in a symphony of tears

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/7/2017 11:37:00 AM
the hurt of love can be devastation, the heart always loving even after hurting. What are we but of the same blood that one choose to hurt one by any mean. What are we but heartless n_lifeless that we let ourselves die but to live in desires for want we thrive truly. We are not the string but merely the tear we let fall. Stay strong in your soul babe! Love always prevail and even then we can be lonely :")
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Date: 11/21/2012 10:16:00 PM
AMY,, Stopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*
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Date: 4/30/2012 2:21:00 PM
So much deep raw emotion Amy....so invoking and descriptive............... Walter
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Date: 4/30/2012 2:21:00 PM
Very deep and sad. But beautifully written.
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Date: 4/27/2012 11:33:00 AM
Easy to imagine a lot of pieces here in this reflection Amy... Very descriptive... Keep on writing... Love Diana
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Date: 4/27/2012 5:32:00 AM
Sad, but lovely written Amy.Well done. - Have a lovely weekend to you. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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