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Broken Reflection

Silent persistence peeling skin from bone
With undamaged precision
Easing an imperceptible knife into flesh
Exposing a fragile heart
Stripped with naked vulnerability
Surrendering willingly to anaesthetized hands
 Craving achingly raw excision
Clouded with hope filled desperation
A lullaby of forged belief

 	Eyes fixated on the gentle thudding of beating 
Echoing from fading warmth between palms
Subconsciously awaiting unavoidable regret

Intensely flaming pain searing through a bruised, empty cavity
Antagonistic fingers familiarly penetrating, ripping apart
		A heart eager to love, drenched in gullibility 
Opening bleeding wounds along already scarred edges
				Leaving torn pieces distraughtly scattered

Bloodied feeling slowly draining
Wisps of past shadowed ghosts
Self-encouraged to plague again
		Evaporating out of void eyes
Ravaging reflected destruction
Self condemned through the hands of a mere puppet

Shameful pain piecing brokenness back together
	Cradling the fading beauty in shrouds of detestation
Dissipating into silence
Drowning in a symphony of tears

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/7/2017 11:37:00 AM
the hurt of love can be devastation, the heart always loving even after hurting. What are we but of the same blood that one choose to hurt one by any mean. What are we but heartless n_lifeless that we let ourselves die but to live in desires for want we thrive truly. We are not the string but merely the tear we let fall. Stay strong in your soul babe! Love always prevail and even then we can be lonely :")
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Date: 11/21/2012 10:16:00 PM
AMY,, Stopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*
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Date: 4/30/2012 2:21:00 PM
So much deep raw emotion Amy....so invoking and descriptive............... Walter
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Date: 4/30/2012 2:21:00 PM
Very deep and sad. But beautifully written.
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Date: 4/27/2012 11:33:00 AM
Easy to imagine a lot of pieces here in this reflection Amy... Very descriptive... Keep on writing... Love Diana
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Date: 4/27/2012 5:32:00 AM
Sad, but lovely written Amy.Well done. - Have a lovely weekend to you. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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