Broken (Quick Write)

Broken dreams and shattered wishes,
Souls torn my hearts in stitches.
This girl was so suspicious,
So vile and oh so wicked,
Her words were sharp and vicious,
Like knife thrusts so malicious.
Looking for signs I’m superstitious,
And oblivious to the fictitious.
Green eyes are so lascivious, 
Deep stares cast spells like witches.
I absorb it I never dish it,
You’re gone, you left, we're finished.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Capone Avatar
August 28, 2009 at 4:24 PM
and thank you Diane.. i also have green eyes. although i hear green eyed people are liars.. i am a sag.. we never lie. :) thanks for your comments all. i will be sharing more soon, just came across a whole notebook from years ago, i will be revising them and posting them soon.
Capone Avatar
August 28, 2009 at 4:22 PM
yes i guess im more of a rapper than a poet.. although most rap music is simply poetry put to music. i was either here under my real name which is anthony.. or cosimiero writer. i just remember you commenting me a few times. thanks Lainie. - sag
George   Avatar
August 28, 2009 at 2:25 AM
So who were you when you were here last? You sound like a rapper to me? Great writing. Lainie
Christian Avatar
August 25, 2009 at 3:35 AM
a great poem, I have green eyes LOL, Thanks for your kind comments God bless
K Avatar
August 14, 2009 at 10:11 PM
Amazing....very sad, yet still very beautiful -Jessica
Brown Avatar
August 12, 2009 at 6:43 AM
So sorry. Excellent writing Sag. Love, Carol
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