Broken Promises

new year's resolutions...tiptoeing through the landmines ritual.



Monoku2: New Year contest
by Silent One.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Gauthier Avatar
January 2, 2018 at 11:05 AM
Congrats on your win, Abdul.
Ashley Avatar
December 29, 2017 at 9:07 PM
Congratulations Abdul on your wonderful win with your amazing poem. Happy New Year! ~Susan
Dietrich Avatar
December 29, 2017 at 4:43 PM
OH, now that is GOOD metaphor!!! Congrats and Happy New YEar, Abdul.
Andresen Avatar
December 29, 2017 at 1:05 PM
- Congratulations, Abdul :) - A great line for the new year - Happy New Year To You - Hugs // Anne-Lise :)
One Avatar
December 29, 2017 at 6:57 AM
Great one liner, Congratulations on your placement in the new year contest and happy new year Abdul Malik..
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