Broken Promises

So many things said
Big dreams and promises made
Void of heart, they fade...
Some stay to avoid the shame
Hollow, they carry the blame
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Bennett Avatar
March 28, 2016 at 12:51 AM
This evening I have read several of you writes and find them to be quite enjoyable and nicely done.
Miljkovic Avatar
March 28, 2016 at 1:04 AM
Much appreciated, glad you enjoyed some of my work - it's all over the place, settling in slowly :)
Palli Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 3:40 AM
can feel the emptiness. so sad. well written
Miljkovic Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 3:46 AM
Thanks :)
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