Broken Promises

On a clear blue sky

Two doves fly, sadly unpaired

Broken hearted love.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Posey Avatar
June 22, 2013 at 7:33 PM
Exquisitely simple containing only the purest of beauty. Great haiku... Jake
Wilderson Avatar
June 12, 2013 at 6:18 AM
Sad and beautiful...what a touching poem. :)
A  Avatar
June 11, 2013 at 4:37 PM
wow! this imagery flew over my roof last year..... broken promises leaves nothing but an echoes of broken dreams................... *Skat
Mohammed Avatar
June 9, 2013 at 9:30 AM
Nice one Shirley.
Candy Avatar
June 9, 2013 at 1:01 PM
Thank you.. ^__^
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