broken promises

she has closed up her soul
tighter than Fort Knox,
no lover has been able 
to peel away the layers 
like an onion petal

her heart broken,
lifeless,
by your broken promises
of love and marriage

while you were away
fighting in the war,
finding love abroad
to occupy your time.
she was here waiting...
planning the perfect wedding,
the perfect home.
white picket fence
in the country.
rose bushes and lush lawn
with a long gravel driveway.

now she struggles
to crawl out of bed,
and focus on getting 
through the day.

her vivacious spirit gone....
her glow gone.....
all that's left
are hollow eyes
into emptiness.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Goldsmith Avatar
July 8, 2026 at 12:23 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading. WOW!!! What a write/story you have here. True for many. The pain, the hurt, the lies... What a great ending... Have a blessed day with your win..........
Croft Avatar
July 9, 2026 at 1:40 AM
thank you for reading, hope you have a good morning writing!
One Avatar
July 7, 2026 at 2:11 PM
This reminds me of the song, Whiskey Lullaby... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Croft Avatar
July 7, 2026 at 8:11 PM
thank you so much!
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