Broken Promises

Promises, Promises...boldy broken
I spite these words when hastily spoken
The act pledged is almost never the issue
  it's the scanning of priorties...somehow they missed you!!
You would never have held breath and waited
  But the promiser spoke, declaritively stated...
"I will..."  "We'll Go...." "Real soon..."  "I promise..."
  You'd have no reason not to take them at honest...

From as far back as I can remember
every promise I heard was "return to sender"
The phone would ring, my heart would sing
  voice on the other end says...."forget the whole thing"
No fishing trips, campouts, or cookouts...look out!
  Every time my hopes were up, then hooked out...
I died each time they let me down
  when they picked me up, then set me down
    when I had to kick start the merry-go-round
      sat in an unpushed swing at the play ground...

So thinking back, I know it's why
I see a broken promise like a boldface lie
I hate nothing more than when words are hollow
  when an oral oath lacks the action to follow
        Trust breaks down when mouths, they run
         Hold your tongue then no harm is done!!
            



Inspired by Michael's "What gets your Goat" contest!!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Fraser Avatar
May 14, 2009 at 3:57 PM
Brillaint poem Steve, excellently written, James
Herber Avatar
March 18, 2009 at 7:26 PM
This is incredible! I love this! As a divorced mother of three beautiful children--and a magnet for alcoholics--I am no stranger to broken promises! This one made me cry--and for someone on here to touch me like that--means that person has definite talent! I am some-what of a cold hearted person when it comes the outlook on life--only because I have had to go through so many trials and struggles! Thank you for this inspirational piece! Definitely my favorite!
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
March 7, 2009 at 10:18 AM
Too many people make promises they never intend to keep. It builds a lack of trust. Excellent write. Vince
Russ Avatar
March 4, 2009 at 1:24 PM
I agree. You really have a way of verbalizing disappointment and deceit. Well done. Caroline
Townsend Avatar
March 3, 2009 at 9:02 PM
Wow, so powerful. As I choke back the tears of being able to relate I take time to say, you are an amazing writer. The words leap from this page to ones heart. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest. Smiles from Lolita
Mccall Avatar
March 3, 2009 at 8:26 PM
Well written as promises are not meant to be broken
Weber Avatar
March 2, 2009 at 12:22 PM
I really enjoy the wit and clever wordplay on this one, Steve! I think there's something here for just about anyone to relate to, without doubt. Great job relating to the disappointments of the world, man! Warm regards, John.
Chamma Avatar
March 1, 2009 at 11:54 AM
A great powerful write...Thank you for sharing... The young one, Farah
Lindsey Avatar
February 27, 2009 at 1:09 PM
i didnt get any mail yet... and hah yea i wasnt in a valentines day mood. lol
Winter Avatar
February 27, 2009 at 5:26 AM
Wow. Well written with depths of emotion here. Reads like a winner to me. Good luck Steve! Love, Shar
Richards Avatar
February 26, 2009 at 4:51 PM
Excellent job here, Steve....the anger and disappointment just shouts...and rightfully so! Good luck...you did an outstanding job! ~ Carrie
De La Keur Avatar
February 26, 2009 at 2:54 PM
This was wonderfully written and inspiring. I absolutely LOVED it, promises shouldn't be broken, and it stinks when they are. Beautifully written.....Aleera
Higgins Avatar
February 26, 2009 at 1:33 PM
Very good Steve..Broken promises are bold face lie my friend..well done. Best wishes.
Hayton Avatar
February 26, 2009 at 1:03 PM
This is really beautiful steve, so easy to read and flows so easily into each line, really love this...
Ginn Avatar
February 26, 2009 at 12:47 PM
Steve my sweet, your words are so powerful and painful. So many hurtful statements but the unswung swing killed. Trust so easily given but hard to regain. And they lived happily ever after...sorry I just had to put that,,wishful thinking I know
Degenhardt Avatar
February 26, 2009 at 12:43 PM
Steven, broken promises always got my goat as well. Like I tell my kids, don't make promises ever unless you're sure you can go through with them. A wonderfully written piece. Michael
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