Get Your Premium Membership

Broken Promise

Shot in the chest a soldier staggers, alone, through the woods to his end It happened in the midst of battle but it wasn't his enemy, it was his friend Both loved the same woman and jealousy ran deep The battle broke and havoc ensued, the friend took the leap Frustrated that he came in second, he had to win Given the chance, he released the monster within He stared his his friend in the eyes He shot him dead center and watched him wander off to die That soldier has seconds left He sees his one true love before he embraces death

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 8/18/2014 4:58:00 AM
How deep, dark and incredibly sad. Such a tragic scenario not to be killed by the enemy but by your friend:-( Excellently penned:-) Hugs jan xxx
Login to Reply
Date: 8/18/2014 4:00:00 AM
Seen the very pieces of the broken promises.
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things