Broken Promise

A given promise
frivlously broken; hurts
in the end, relieves

3.6.2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Neumann Avatar
June 6, 2020 at 7:45 AM
True sentiment. My own victory came from defeat ...
Chutani Avatar
June 6, 2020 at 9:14 AM
Kai, thanks for your encouraging words. Mohan
Wolf Avatar
June 3, 2020 at 7:38 PM
You know, everything's for the best. Always turns out that way. Nice write. Food for thought! :) gw
Chutani Avatar
June 4, 2020 at 7:21 AM
Yes, eventually, one needs to keep patience and move on.
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
June 3, 2020 at 6:11 PM
Wise words, Mohan...in time, we live, learn and heal. Blessing, Rhonda
Chutani Avatar
June 4, 2020 at 7:22 AM
Yes, that is what we forget often. Need to be reminded constantly.
La France Avatar
June 3, 2020 at 12:39 PM
Mohan, wonderful, a broken promise is the worst promise and takes time to heal but yes in the end there is a wisdom to hold on to _Constance
Chutani Avatar
June 4, 2020 at 7:25 AM
Constance, patience pays. One feels rich in experience after letting go.
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