Broken Promise

A given promise frivlously broken; hurts in the end, relieves 3.6.2020

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Date: 6/6/2020 7:45:00 AM

True sentiment. My own victory came from defeat ...

Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/6/2020 9:14:00 AM

Kai, thanks for your encouraging words. Mohan

Date: 6/3/2020 7:38:00 PM

You know, everything's for the best. Always turns out that way. Nice write. Food for thought! :) gw

Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/4/2020 7:21:00 AM

Yes, eventually, one needs to keep patience and move on.

Date: 6/3/2020 6:11:00 PM

Wise words, Mohan...in time, we live, learn and heal. Blessing, Rhonda

Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/4/2020 7:22:00 AM

Yes, that is what we forget often. Need to be reminded constantly.

Date: 6/3/2020 12:39:00 PM

Mohan, wonderful, a broken promise is the worst promise and takes time to heal but yes in the end there is a wisdom to hold on to _Constance

Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/4/2020 7:25:00 AM

Constance, patience pays. One feels rich in experience after letting go.