Broken Pieces

Broken pieces of my heart
I left it on the path to mend
devoured by the hungry hounds
I am sorry this world 
isn't the place it ought to be
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Kithinji Avatar
September 19, 2013 at 4:56 PM
There is plenty of room for improvement- all round!
Kiran Avatar
September 19, 2013 at 5:37 PM
thank you for the advise, i will take that into consideration...
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