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Broken Pieces

Broken pieces intermingled scatteredshatters unsorted reassembled a mosaic of madness blending scars and flaws into the beauty of a shared life. John G. Lawless ©3/10/2019

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Ralph Sergi

Date: 3/22/2019 4:11:00 PM

Hi John: You reassembled broken pieces into a beautiful poem!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/22/2019 2:41:00 PM

how true is it that chaos brings order... your vision of shared life is impressive, john! ...huggs

John Lawless
Date: 3/23/2019 1:03:00 PM

The trick Nette is to hold them together with that elusive invisible glue....

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 3/22/2019 2:26:00 PM

Hello John lawless, broken mosaic pieces is like a broken heart shattered in pieces. have a nice day my friend.

John Lawless
Date: 3/23/2019 1:01:00 PM

Thanks Darlene, these pieces are always a wonder metaphor so much of life's discordant wonder

Jan Allison

Date: 3/22/2019 9:22:00 AM

Life and love can break us but like a mosaic when the pieces fit together it can be so beautiful, love this gem John, into my faves:-) hugs Jan xx

John Lawless
Date: 3/23/2019 1:00:00 PM

Yeah, Jan, mosaic and stained glass......shatters....turned to beauty at the hand of a master