Broken Petals

A cold mist surrounds me,
I can't help but watch as my petals die.
I look for my friends who used to stand tall beside me, 
But, they are curled in pain,
I cry to them in vain.
Slowly, I'm joining the fallen ones beside me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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April 16, 2012 at 9:55 PM
Congrats on your win.Very nice personification here .Enjoyed.
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April 16, 2012 at 12:46 PM
Congratulations on your win in the wonderful contest Brian sponsored "XII". You did yourself proud with your grand writing Heaven. Love, Carol
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