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Broken Petals

A cold mist surrounds me, I can't help but watch as my petals die. I look for my friends who used to stand tall beside me, But, they are curled in pain, I cry to them in vain. Slowly, I'm joining the fallen ones beside me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/16/2012 9:55:00 PM
Congrats on your win.Very nice personification here .Enjoyed.
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Date: 4/16/2012 12:46:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the wonderful contest Brian sponsored "XII". You did yourself proud with your grand writing Heaven. Love, Carol
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