Broken Old Car

That broken car makes disturbance
an old big deceptive appearance
Some thinks it is pretty,
and best car in city
that what its dump driver announce
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Andresen Avatar
February 21, 2025 at 12:34 PM
- A car will always be an expensive pleasure, Abdullah ... but nice to have :) - Happy weekend :) - hugs
Alhemaidy Avatar
February 21, 2025 at 4:54 PM
Happy weekend lovely sweet poetess! I prefer not to explain my simple poem. :-) hugs xx
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