Broken Memoirs

Wizened and shriveled,
       he was cut down to size-
In disbelief, she lied and he cried 
crimson tears from his eyes.
Shackled in a retention cage 
     healing from a mordacious attack, 
knowing her cruelty was contagious 
           and he would never get her back. 

He’d horde all the memoirs, 
a cartridge of letters from before-
For he adored her and she discouraged
     him into an uproar. 
The elicit manner in which she spoke
broke apart his conviction, 
         her explicit behavior tore his heart
causing nothing but friction.

In the end, he realized he deserved 
better than she bestowed,
     A best friend wouldn’t patronize, 
so those letters he let go.
He began to loiter all day and night 
        how could he be so naïve?
For he was nothing but her trifle 
to her…
     leaving him to grieve.




Eight Word Challenge
March 23, 2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Hamilton Avatar
April 9, 2017 at 1:46 PM
Wonderful write and use of the words selected, however a little long to place higher in this contest! Thanks for the entry
Coreggia Avatar
March 23, 2017 at 8:21 AM
A powerful and thought-provoking poem. No sooner was I done reading that I read it again. Beautifully done Laura. We feel his pain and her 'brutal' cruelty. A 7:) Amitiés
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