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Broken Love

Courtrooms and CAGES
Arrests, scared...scarred from 
the RAGES!

Broken hearts from broken 
doors.
Glass SHATTERED!
The consequences didn't seem 
to MATTER!

Built me new!
Tore me down.
Never built me BACK!
I don't know which hurt worse  
the first... or the last ATTACK!

It was me and you.
Then US!
Now it's you and ME 
SEPARATELY-
No TRUST!

Epiphanies, metaphors, 
moments of CONNECTIONS
We had it all through deep 
INTROSPECTION. 

I may have been your mirror 
but you were mine as WELL,
In your reflection I saw 
heaven...
in my reflection, you saw HELL!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/10/2014 5:32:00 AM
real strong piece Carly, love your descriptive wording and use of rhyme in capitals, nicely done, God bless, Gordon
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Date: 6/9/2014 7:27:00 AM
Welcome to poetry soup Carly, also... , Congratulations on having your poem Featured on the Poetry Soups Home Page. Enjoy the coming week. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 6/9/2014 7:21:00 AM
A piece of good poetry. Keep it up and congrats on your poem selected to be featured, caRLY
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Date: 5/30/2014 5:04:00 AM
Thank you Faye! I appreciate your comment and for welcoming me:)
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Date: 5/26/2014 4:12:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Carly. I believe you will find much support here. Keep writing; comment on the poems of other writers and most of them will return the favor. Best wishes.
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