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Broken Love

Courtrooms and CAGES Arrests, scared...scarred from the RAGES! Broken hearts from broken doors. Glass SHATTERED! The consequences didn't seem to MATTER! Built me new! Tore me down. Never built me BACK! I don't know which hurt worse the first... or the last ATTACK! It was me and you. Then US! Now it's you and ME SEPARATELY- No TRUST! Epiphanies, metaphors, moments of CONNECTIONS We had it all through deep INTROSPECTION. I may have been your mirror but you were mine as WELL, In your reflection I saw heaven... in my reflection, you saw HELL!

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Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 6/10/2014 5:32:00 AM

real strong piece Carly, love your descriptive wording and use of rhyme in capitals, nicely done, God bless, Gordon

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/9/2014 7:27:00 AM

Welcome to poetry soup Carly, also... , Congratulations on having your poem Featured on the Poetry Soups Home Page. Enjoy the coming week. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/9/2014 7:21:00 AM

A piece of good poetry. Keep it up and congrats on your poem selected to be featured, caRLY

Carly Steelberg

Date: 5/30/2014 5:04:00 AM

Thank you Faye! I appreciate your comment and for welcoming me:)

Faye Gibson

Date: 5/26/2014 4:12:00 PM

Welcome to Poetry Soup, Carly. I believe you will find much support here. Keep writing; comment on the poems of other writers and most of them will return the favor. Best wishes.