Broken Love

When I first met you I was so in love with you.Every text every call would make my heart bounce off the walls.But my heart broke when I saw you awoke with a differant girl and a whole new differant show.My tears would last for days and my friends would try to save the day.But the waves took me away on this long journey I choose to take.True love is only there when both people truely care.This is a lessoned learned for having my turn.At love that flows like the ocean goes.

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Richard Palmer

Date: 7/20/2012 6:01:00 PM

love is the hurdle of life,we hit it a few times and fall,but after a few try we get the hang,great write Ebony

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/19/2012 4:10:00 PM

Agree with you Ebony "True love is only there when both people truely care" - Like your poem...well done. - oxox Anne-Lise