Broken Love

When I first met you I was so in love with you.Every text every call would make my heart bounce off the walls.But my heart broke when I saw you awoke with a differant girl and a whole new differant show.My tears would last for days and my friends would try to save the day.But the waves took me away on this long journey I choose to take.True love is only there when both people truely care.This is a lessoned learned for having my turn.At love that flows like the ocean goes.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Palmer Avatar
July 20, 2012 at 6:01 PM
love is the hurdle of life,we hit it a few times and fall,but after a few try we get the hang,great write Ebony
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July 19, 2012 at 4:10 PM
Agree with you Ebony "True love is only there when both people truely care" - Like your poem...well done. - oxox Anne-Lise
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