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Broken Into Pieces

Take me as I am, just as I am, For I am broken into pieces With irregular edges, my flesh Was scarred by hopelessness, And, sometimes, utter despair From destructive forces which I…I alone could not conquer. The pieces of me have struggled To come together to reassemble To make my whole worthy, and I Want you to know I am capable Of love, Lord, if you take me as I am. FOURTH PLACE WINNER submitted to "Inspirational Christian" Poetry Contest sponsored by Regina McIntosh February 22, 2022 Written August 12, 2021 especially for “Broken Pottery” Poetry Contest sponsored by Craig Cornish HONORABLE MENTION Poetry Contest by Astaria All Poetry - August 15, 2021

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Susan Ashley

Date: 3/9/2022 3:56:00 PM

Dear Milton, your expressive pen and humble inspiration is so very moving, revealing human vulnerability, surrender and faith so beautifully. Congratulations for your excellent win in Regina’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Sam Kauffman

Date: 3/7/2022 10:23:00 AM

Amazing testimony Milt. As God re-assembles your broken pieces I love your conclusion - "I am capable of love again." What a beautiful line. Congratulations on your win!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/7/2022 11:09:00 AM

Thanks so much, Sam. I appreciate your thoughts and your comment.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 3/6/2022 4:03:00 AM

Dear Milton, he wouldn't want you any other way, you are His beautiful great mosaic, congrats on your win, a splendid write :)

L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/6/2022 9:13:00 AM

Thanks so much, Mystic Rose Rose. I so appreciate you!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/15/2021 3:49:00 AM

So much spirituality and faith in this; wonderful pen.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/15/2021 10:03:00 AM

Ah, I'm glad you found it an uplifting read, Caren.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 8/12/2021 10:56:00 PM

broken pottery depicting the Inner brokenness - Very beautifully written.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/13/2021 8:31:00 AM

Thank you so much, Christuraj.

Barbara Peckham

Date: 8/12/2021 8:37:00 PM

This is a very touching poem. It pulls at the heartstrings, and it appeals to all of us who have felt that way about ourselves. And there are many of us!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/12/2021 9:29:00 PM

Thanks so much, Barbara. A compliment from you is really meaningful to me!