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Broken Instrument

What happens to this poetry embroidered within the walls of my heart, When the joy of my words are shattered underneath your feet, Can the torture of your empty moon paint a slithering promise, Far across into my deep colorless dreamscape of dahlias, Your dry eyed apologies took me to a mortal with no reflection, As you hide behind your short lived excuses and homed cruel intentions, Like a fool I was to believe that a rose could bloom in the peeks of winter, While broken instruments illustrated a weak illusion, Shame, These knees you held with such tender affection, Poured our tales into my abstract dreams, How you wandered into my eyes casting a waning crescent, Hoping the fragrant of a swine won’t clear my sight, I’ve stood by the hills, where it steeps down your hell, Perhaps the burdens you trust and love are the saint in your spells, Claiming clarity for a chaos that have you deeply compelled.

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Date: 10/15/2023 9:25:00 PM
I love this poem. It speaks to the reader and its message is clear, simple, and important. Thank you for sharing it with us.
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Date: 10/12/2023 6:36:00 AM
A great way to introduce yourself. A belated welcome to the soup.
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Date: 9/28/2023 11:33:00 AM
I love the way you express the light and dark in you, :)
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Date: 9/9/2023 4:39:00 AM
Such fine verses brings old memories to this old poet's heart. You write of a broken instrument as a broken heart my friend. ""Such love when lost is as if one falls into a deep black hole. As shadowy hand arrive to rip and shred a sad dying soul. No where to hide , no forgetting place to a better shelter find. On a black continent, a vagabond complete with lost mind."" RJL. A definitive and very fine gem for me to fav... God bless you .
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Robert Lindley
Date: 9/9/2023 4:42:00 AM
My friend, I in my youth travelled to such a place more than once. Yet somehow, God saved me three different times. Ido not wish that on any man. All that was a darkness, but it also was great fodder for a poet. God bless you.
Date: 9/6/2023 9:19:00 PM
Lioness, you hit the ground running with your poignant portrayal of an abusive relationship and its emotional toll. Welcome to Poetry Soup!
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Lioness Onpaper
Date: 9/7/2023 3:13:00 AM
Thank you soo much .. yes .. relationships have a way with moving the ground from under us .. one way or the other … hehe
Date: 9/6/2023 7:45:00 PM
I absolutely love this piece and it tugged at my heartstrings, so many evocative and deep lines, which reflect vulnerability, angst, ache and moving emotions.. "A rose could bloom in the peeks of winter", "you wandered into my eyes casting a waning crescent" That's so beautifully written.. But the feelings are painstaking, when our heart faces no love but only betrayals. So many lines held my soul here, such a brilliant write, to be shared first on soup, welcome The Lioness!!!
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Lioness Onpaper
Date: 9/7/2023 3:12:00 AM
Thank you soo much for reading my piece .. glad you enjoyed it ..
Date: 9/6/2023 3:09:00 PM
Hi. Do I know you? From Insta? In any case, you are obviously quite talented and will be a welcome presence here. When you get time stop my way. :)
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Lioness Onpaper
Date: 9/7/2023 3:11:00 AM
Oh .. not sure but you might have seen me on insta … I most definitely will visit your pieces… thank you soo much for the support…
Date: 9/6/2023 11:53:00 AM
You have a wonderful way with words and are such a metaphorical genius.. no kettle in this one? love that line, 'Your dry eyed apologies took me to a mortal with no reflection,' world is full of those who will use and abuse you and then betray you... nice introduction to the soup.
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Lioness Onpaper
Date: 9/7/2023 3:09:00 AM
Hahahah no kettle brothaaa…. Kettle is taking a break ????…. Thank you brotha for the support always
Date: 9/6/2023 4:47:00 AM
What a beautiful poem as an introduction …. Welcome to poetry soup . ??
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Lioness Onpaper
Date: 9/6/2023 5:07:00 AM
Thank you dahlin … same to you as well …. We shall share more here
Date: 9/6/2023 4:45:00 AM
Oh my lionness papi, so good to see you post your take on my island prompt “ dreamscape of dahlias” you’ve written so well here and the flow and depth of this is beyond impeccable. You always weave metaphors so very eloquently. And i love @ broken instruments as well as how you’ve written “ i was a fool to think roses bloom in winter” sooo good! Ah good riddance to those that manipulated you into thinking theres more to a relation. Loveeee this … welcome to poetry soup! Keep writing and sharing
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Lioness Onpaper
Date: 9/6/2023 5:05:00 AM
Awwwwn thank you Papi for introducing me to this platform… looking forward to sharing more artistry here <3

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