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Broken Hopes of Sun

Broken hopes of gold Pale orange sun sets in tears Loaded Obama _________________________________ 13/1/2017

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Date: 1/13/2017 7:00:00 PM

IS this about Obama having to leave office and be replaced by a monster? Yes, my hopes are indeed shattered!! (I see Victor below has my number!!)

Probir Gupta
Date: 1/13/2017 8:00:00 PM

Right ... thank you ...

Date: 1/13/2017 2:13:00 PM

- Wonderful haiku ... well written, Probir - Lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Probir Gupta
Date: 1/13/2017 8:02:00 PM

Thank you ...

Date: 1/13/2017 8:26:00 AM

A very perfect haiku... True indeed... A,big 7...

Probir Gupta
Date: 1/13/2017 8:04:00 PM

Thank you, Supraja ... probir

Date: 1/13/2017 7:22:00 AM

Great observation dear, Probir!

Probir Gupta
Date: 1/13/2017 7:39:00 AM

Thank you ...