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Broken Hopes of Sun

Broken hopes of gold Pale orange sun sets in tears Loaded Obama _________________________________ 13/1/2017

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Date: 1/13/2017 7:00:00 PM
IS this about Obama having to leave office and be replaced by a monster? Yes, my hopes are indeed shattered!! (I see Victor below has my number!!)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 1/13/2017 8:00:00 PM
Right ... thank you ...
Date: 1/13/2017 8:26:00 AM
A very perfect haiku... True indeed... A,big 7...
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Probir Gupta
Date: 1/13/2017 8:04:00 PM
Thank you, Supraja ... probir
Date: 1/13/2017 7:22:00 AM
Great observation dear, Probir!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 1/13/2017 7:39:00 AM
Thank you ...