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Broken Homes

Broken homes, Broken places. Can’t escape, No empty spaces. Standing on the edge. Contemplating goodbye. In a home in the city, I see her cry. If home is where the heart is, Then why do so many say goodbye? Cause broken homes and broken places, Disintegrate to empty spaces.

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Date: 1/26/2011 5:27:00 PM
Very expressive about a sad situation..Good work on this topic..Sara
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Date: 1/25/2011 6:22:00 PM
sad but true very nice..............
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Date: 1/24/2011 4:36:00 PM
liz, next to your name is a bowl of soup and an envelope. people click on it to send you mail. in order for you to get it, to the left side of the page is a topic "My Soup Mail" cilck on it to get your soup mail. do it now. jhl
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Date: 1/24/2011 3:25:00 PM
very good work...I can almost hear the song. thanks julie
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Date: 1/19/2011 6:52:00 AM
it's singable, i tried. john
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Date: 12/9/2010 5:46:00 PM
Very good flow here Elizabeth. Makes a good point too. Enjoyed Charles
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