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Broken Hearts and Rusty Blades

Broken hearts and rusty blades my love for you will never fade i broke your heart and stabbed your back your love for me will fade to black one more chance I'll make things right Rusty blades and broken hearts my hearts shot through with poisoned darts i dreamed of love, gained only hate you doomed me to a frightful fate one mistake, I'll be haunted forever Broken hearts can love again mine will never be the same I think of you both night and day your picture in my head will stay one last night of tears i weep for what i sowed i now reep

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/16/2009 3:18:00 PM
Good rhymes flowing, God bless Moses!
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Date: 7/16/2009 2:42:00 PM
Reality in a romantic piece, this is awesome. You are such a promising poet. Keep writing. Adeleke
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Date: 7/16/2009 2:25:00 PM
Karan, this poem flowed just perfectly. A warm welcome to the Soup>>James
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Date: 7/16/2009 2:23:00 PM
really nice rhymes in here. check out some of my poems
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