Broken Hearts and Rusty Blades

Broken hearts and rusty blades
my love for you will never fade
i broke your heart and stabbed your back
your love for me will fade to black
one more chance I'll make things right

Rusty blades and broken hearts 
my hearts shot through with poisoned darts
i dreamed of love, gained only hate
you doomed me to a frightful fate
one mistake, I'll be haunted forever

Broken hearts can love again
mine will never be the same
I think of you both night and day
your picture in my head will stay
one last night of tears i weep
for what i sowed i now reep
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Freeman Avatar
July 16, 2009 at 3:18 PM
Good rhymes flowing, God bless Moses!
Adeite Avatar
July 16, 2009 at 2:42 PM
Reality in a romantic piece, this is awesome. You are such a promising poet. Keep writing. Adeleke
Fraser Avatar
July 16, 2009 at 2:25 PM
Karan, this poem flowed just perfectly. A warm welcome to the Soup>>James
Meadows Avatar
July 16, 2009 at 2:23 PM
really nice rhymes in here. check out some of my poems
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