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Nicola Byrne's You Broke My Heart contest

Broken Hearts

are broken hearts hard to find?

they’ve littered the streets,
since the beginning of time!
it is the unspoken war, the one we avoid.

we speak of a splinter of glass
one here…one there

but yolks are smashed –
can’t you see the spreading mustard gas?

how pretty paper hearts look together…

but watch the tearing in two
                                                   the crushing
                                        the shredding
                                                           the screaming

i’m out of breath to think of such things…

cupid’s arrows hurt! they pierce, they twist, they bleed!
some folks are just an offering –

arrows all over her – in her crown, shoulder, stomach, side –
she’s terrified, closed up inside, too many stitches.

her mouth no longer says-  i love you…

painted on lips quiver and shake, at everyone within her wake.

wake up, move on, he’s not worth your time!

she’s cold inside, like icy titanic waters. but -

she didn’t drown. she barely        clings      to the lifeboat

along with every other tear in the ocean deep.
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2/7/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Burch Avatar
February 16, 2017 at 5:51 PM
Indeed!! Tears all over the place!! Well done Kim!! Congratulations!! Big Hugggs deb!
White Avatar
February 15, 2017 at 3:17 AM
Kim, this tore at my heart too.... So beautifully penned. Congratulations.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 15, 2017 at 8:06 AM
Thanks so much, Darren!
Green Avatar
February 7, 2017 at 8:51 AM
This was as beautiful as it was sad and deep Kim. You have captured the pain and anguish that comes with a broken heart wonderfully and creatively. Good luck in the contest
Rodrigues Avatar
February 7, 2017 at 9:08 AM
Thank you, Chris! :)
Daniel Avatar
February 7, 2017 at 8:22 AM
Such a strong write, Kim:) looks like a winner:)
Rodrigues Avatar
February 7, 2017 at 8:28 AM
Thanks so much, Jo! :)
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