Broken Hearts

A 
Lonely 
Heartbroken
Forgotten soul
That's lost in the dark
Cannot find their way back
Without they first learn to heal
The promises that were broken
And discarded like yesterday's trash
Then and only then can they love again
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Tideswell Avatar
June 29, 2010 at 4:36 PM
Lovely, and very meaningful etheree Larry. I don't know the rules regarding punctuation in etheree. Just think maybe your last line would benefit from a couple of commas, if allowed. Either way it's super ~ Sharon :)
Taylor Avatar
June 29, 2010 at 2:58 PM
Great write, Larry. Very profound. Kudos, Buddy. ...Ralph
Sweetheart Avatar
June 29, 2010 at 12:28 PM
Nice Etheree Larry ..now did u attempt the Palindrome as yet? did mine last night.. Ignition.. and it was so fun.. know u will enter a good one too.. let me know ..want to read while I am on vacation .. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii
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