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Broken Heart

LAST NIGHT I TRIED BUT I COULDNT SLEEP THOUGHT OF YOU WERE IN MY HEAD I WAS LONLY AND NEEDED YOU NEXT TO ME LIFE IS HEARDER SINCE YOU LEFT I DONT KNOW WHAT TO DO OR TO GO I KNOW I HAVE BROKEN THE BOAT TO MOVE ON AND I HOPE ALL IS DONE YOU KNOW I CANT GO FOWARD IF MY HEART STILL WHERE I CAME FROM I TRID TO SPEAK BUT MY WORD LIKE YOU NEVER KNEW I WAS THERE TIME ME BACK TO THE DAYS WHEN YOU REALLY CARE AND ME OUR LOVE TO BE APEAR MY HEART IS LOST WITHOUT YOU

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/23/2016 9:54:00 AM

Xolile,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@