Broken Heart

Falling apart when the mind doesnt 
stand still,
Holding yourself to the last 
remaining grip,
Telling yourself to stay strong, 
nothing is impossible,
But your hands feel heavy no more,
Your legs feel just so light,
Falling away from the heavenly light,
Sinking into the drop dead night,
Wish I could hold you for the one 
last time,
But its too late, its time to say 
goodbye.
Never thought a day would come,
But it has now already passed by.
Hope I could see you in my next life,
So that I could hold you in my arms 
and just melt away...
Just to make you mine.
A~D
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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September 14, 2013 at 7:08 PM
Hi Allen, , CONGRATULATIONS, on having your poem FEATURED on the soups Home Page:-). Good-Night **Linda**
Danie Avatar
September 15, 2013 at 12:05 AM
Thank you Linda...have a good night. :) A~D
Mehta Avatar
September 12, 2013 at 7:27 PM
Congrats on your poem being featured this week, Allen
Danie Avatar
September 13, 2013 at 2:31 PM
Thank you doc... :) A~D
Nigros Avatar
September 11, 2013 at 1:04 AM
wow beautiful words scribed poetically,,, i loved reading each line,,,, as i was reading through i was taken to a trip of your hurts which took me to mine as well.... nyc one
Danie Avatar
September 13, 2013 at 2:28 PM
Thank you Patrick for the review.... :) A~D
Macfarlane Avatar
August 29, 2013 at 8:40 AM
I could feel your pain and wistfulness in this heartfelt write. Well done! A warm welcome to the soup. Hugs
Danie Avatar
August 31, 2013 at 4:39 PM
Thank you for the review Cecilia..... :) A~D
Dietrich Avatar
August 27, 2013 at 2:42 PM
oh my, what a sad and tender poem this is. I love how you made us FEEL and not just tell us your pain!
Danie Avatar
August 27, 2013 at 11:28 PM
Thank you Andrea. Good to know you could understand the feeling :) A~D
Dietrich Avatar
August 27, 2013 at 2:41 PM
Hi, Allen. Nice to meet you. I am not a hardcore fan of the Star Trek show, but i did watch it back in the day!! I was a bigger fan of Boston Legal, which Shatner appeared in as a much older guy! Now let me see your poem here.
Danie Avatar
August 27, 2013 at 11:28 PM
Yaa please do look into it... A~D
Austin Avatar
August 27, 2013 at 8:20 AM
Love that idea of eternity - "melting away." Good to know you. Thanks for reading my stuff. daver
Duncan Avatar
August 27, 2013 at 12:04 AM
nicely done ;}
Danie Avatar
August 27, 2013 at 11:29 PM
Thank you Debbie :) A~D
Kilmer Avatar
August 26, 2013 at 6:12 PM
Nice write Allen. The first line really brought me into the poem and the rest was excellent as well. Looking forward to hearing more from you. Well done.~Kilmer
Danie Avatar
August 27, 2013 at 11:30 PM
Thank you Kilmer for the support. Inspires me to write more :) A~D
Anglesey Avatar
August 26, 2013 at 6:38 AM
"Hope I could see you in my next life" ... that is a line that really conveys a deep love and yearning. Well done
Danie Avatar
August 26, 2013 at 7:54 AM
Yes it sure does mean that. Thank you for the support. :) A~D
That Archaic Poet Avatar
August 24, 2013 at 10:38 AM
"Sinking into the drop dead night"- beautiful and clever verse that I wish I had penned. You are expressing a universal, and I love when a poet does that. This is a cool piece and I very much enjoyed the read. Kudos! :)
Danie Avatar
August 25, 2013 at 10:28 PM
Lol..thats fine.....anyway you guys encourage me to write more....have a great day.. :) A~D
That Archaic Poet Avatar
August 24, 2013 at 10:39 AM
should say *universal sentiment lol I've been drinking this morning; sorry
Babu Avatar
August 24, 2013 at 4:14 AM
GOOD JOBBB./#$$#
Danie Avatar
August 24, 2013 at 4:37 AM
thanx man.... :)
Pratap Avatar
August 24, 2013 at 1:51 AM
pavam chakkan :P
Danie Avatar
August 24, 2013 at 4:36 AM
poda poda.... :)
Shines Avatar
August 12, 2013 at 8:46 AM
sad but good write.
Danie Avatar
August 14, 2013 at 1:48 PM
Thank you kenisha :)
Andresen Avatar
August 10, 2013 at 3:04 PM
- Really well written, Allen. - Have a great weekend! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Danie Avatar
August 12, 2013 at 7:50 AM
Thank you...You too have a wonderful weekend :)
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