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Broken Heart

Everyday I am happy to be in the presence of my angel, he is my one true source of comfort. The sun always seems to shine regardless of rain clouds drifting across the azure sky. His touch sends lust coursing through my veins making my heart beat faster. The frequent devotion transformed into blood-red roses that he bestows upon me with his sparkling smile. Sadly this was short-lived for my happiness turned into pain, tears fell like raindrops down my soft velvet skin. My inner screams went unheard, no-one seemed to notice my cries for empathy or relief from this dark and lonely place. My heart has been broken into a thousand pieces so small that they could pass through the eye of a needle. My angel has fallen, jealousy roamed within his heart making his baby blue eyes turn green with envy. My heart feels lost in this ocean of lost hope and trust; happiness and joy do not exist in this hellish bubble of pain and agony. My heart has been broken and the voice of my angel no-longer enters my mind for he has now fallen leaving nothing but a betrayed heart in his wake.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/1/2017 12:57:00 AM
A very sad poem, you ve written it beautifully, I really like reading it and will find time to read others as well however I m new on this site and would really appreciate if you could find time to read my poems and give your honest reviews about them
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Date: 1/16/2012 6:17:00 AM
Lovely written,Leighann - sorry for lost love.- oxox Anne-Lise
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Date: 1/10/2012 2:10:00 PM
This is so sad, Leighann. was this a recent breakup? now THIS is the kind of poetry I like to see from you, descriptive and emotive.
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Date: 1/10/2012 11:27:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your amazing poetry this afternoon Leighann. I hope to be able to read a lot more of your writing in this new year of 2012. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/9/2012 11:58:00 PM
Oh, how sad, Leighann. Take solace in knowing that for every fallen angel and broken heart - there is another angel waiting to mend it. It just takes time. Too much anguish and you may miss the next opportunity. It his his loss - not yours. Anyone who can write poetry as beautiful as this, deserves a more loyal Angel to read them. Joe
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